Re: Grade for Forum Post : A-:

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Posted by Svirfie on March 24, 2000 at 13:22:27:

In Reply to: Ok, let's discuss something posted by Polemachus on March 24, 2000 at 13:18:49:

> Things you don't brag about if you're a decent, self-respecting human being. --


Lists should be specified with the use of a colon, not a period. With the sentences structured as they are, you have four incomplete sentences below.

>
> Killing somebody with frightful fiend.
> Killing somebody with power word kill.
> Killing somebody with immortal slay.
> Killing somebody that's naked.
>
>
> Any questions?


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