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Posted by wheeljack on April 19, 2000 at 10:45:48:

In Reply to: Role of a failed Empowerment character: posted by Failed Empowered character of Nepenthe/Criseinur on April 18, 2000 at 19:44:04:

I liked your desc. Although your role was very interesting to read, it was too long. You could have told that story in one or two role entries, albeit less creative or engaging to read. I wouldn't be surprised if an imm just skimmed it cause it was so long, and your life was just starting. Too bad, cause it was good, but for a role i dunno.

Don't know why you didn't get empowered, maybe it seemed like too much, or not enough about your personality, too much about events? Maybe you spelled nep's name wrong?

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believe it or not, imm's -do- have an attention span Graham 11:25:57 4/19/2000 (0)

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Comments:	> I liked your desc. Although your role was very interesting to read, it was too long. You could have told that story in one or two role entries, albeit less creative or engaging to read. I wouldn't be surprised if an imm just skimmed it cause it was so long, and your life was just starting. Too bad, cause it was good, but for a role i dunno. > > Don't know why you didn't get empowered, maybe it seemed like too much, or not enough about your personality, too much about events? Maybe you spelled nep's name wrong?