Posted by Zepachu on November 5, 2000 at 09:14:53:
In Reply to: I knew I could count on you, Love! *hug* t/j/f/z posted by Ekirhal on November 5, 2000 at 04:58:46:
> > You mention having sex with Proud Blade "or" me? ?!?!?!?!?!?!?! As if there's any doubt who you would choose!!! *grumble* Anyway... :-) > Take no offense to this. His name is first only because P comes before Z in the alphabet. Besides, I don't think PB likes me very much (though I don't know why) which kind of negates the whole "competition" idea. > > > Or something... minus the Zepachu sentence. ;-) Oh yeah, if yer going to use numbers, I'd spell them out.. unless you get into the hundreds and above, it just looks better. UNLESS, of course, you said 5'4" It wouldn't look good as 'five foot four inches'... Oh geez, I hope I didn't criticize too much.. I really liked the description, but just showing you how I would structure some things. > Very constructive! Thanks for taking the time to help me out. > Ekirhal *curtsey* *wiggle*
> > You see a female human. She appears below average in height, some five feet tall. She has brown eyes and thin red lips, graced with an ever-present smirk. Her pitch-black hair contrasts heavily with her lightly tanned skin and seems long enough to be pulled back into a short pony tail. The word Zepachu is tattooed on her forehead, indicating her to be his plaything. A few noticeable scars can be seen on her face, neck and hands. At a final glance you gather that although young this female knows much of the ways of this world.
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