does anyone see a problem with this room description?

does anyone see a problem with this room description?:
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Posted by someone on November 7, 2000 at 08:49:15:

Basement.
This seems like your average basement. Old Christmas decorations,
suitcases, bicycles litter your way. You hear the squeaking of
rats in the corners.

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In a world filled with places from many fantasy novels and such, why not Christmas (grin) n/t Helpless Baby 09:45:56 11/7/2000 (1)
- and bicycles? [n/t] dan! 17:01:30 11/7/2000 (0)

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Comments:	> > Basement. > This seems like your average basement. Old Christmas decorations, > suitcases, bicycles litter your way. You hear the squeaking of > rats in the corners.