You have a way in your writing of guiding me as a reader through the chaos in Vahrtznif mind and diverging away from chaotic stupid to just ... insane? :) I was very entertained and I wish I had your skills. If I would offer any advice it would be to second what you already got on the official forums: use the subjects of each role chapter to explain what you are trying to convey. Wish I had interacted with you in the game. Good luck with your next one!