| Date | Immortal | Level | Hours | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-04 19:56:59 | Eshval | 17 | 56 | Nice pray to Pazuzu. |
| 2007-03-30 09:48:10 | Eshval | 38 | 123 | RC entry: I enjoyed the storyline within. The plot was well-constructed, and I would rate this higher, but for the lack of proper paragraph formation when dealing with dialogue...it is a mass of print and it makes it difficu |
| 2007-03-30 09:50:28 | Eshval | 38 | 123 | RC entry cont. - difficult to read. Format the work with proper breaks for different folks speaking and not make the entry a three-page paragraph, and it would read easier. |