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Posted by First Time on February 4, 2000 at 14:47:41:

This is my first attempt at a role. Could anybody give me some consructive critsism and pointers for the future.

Role + My name is Felinor; I originally entered this world to bring it order under my thumb. I was proud and full of my own capabilities. I am still proud, however, one fateful day I came to the realization that I cannot do this on my own. That is when I met Iiaynor, a fellow destroyer of the light and former traveling companion. It was Iiaynor who first told me about the Empire and their quest to bring this chaotic realm to its knees. I have decided to join them.

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You might already know this, but... Guilo 16:11:04 2/4/2000 (0)

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Comments:	> This is my first attempt at a role. Could anybody give me some consructive critsism and pointers for the future. > Role + My name is Felinor; I originally entered this world to bring it order under my thumb. I was proud and full of my own capabilities. I am still proud, however, one fateful day I came to the realization that I cannot do this on my own. That is when I met Iiaynor, a fellow destroyer of the light and former traveling companion. It was Iiaynor who first told me about the Empire and their quest to bring this chaotic realm to its knees. I have decided to join them.