Posted by Guilo on February 4, 2000 at 16:11:04:
In Reply to: More on roles. (text) posted by First Time on February 4, 2000 at 14:47:41:
Dont type role + and then the entire message. Do it so its like 60 characters long then hit enter. Then role + again and keep going, else it will end up a long mess. And what does "bring it order under my thumb" mean? Either add some () of commas. Oh, and do a bit of a background. (It is one of the most important parts.) > This is my first attempt at a role. Could anybody give me some consructive critsism and pointers for the future. > Role + My name is Felinor; I originally entered this world to bring it order under my thumb. I was proud and full of my own capabilities. I am still proud, however, one fateful day I came to the realization that I cannot do this on my own. That is when I met Iiaynor, a fellow destroyer of the light and former traveling companion. It was Iiaynor who first told me about the Empire and their quest to bring this chaotic realm to its knees. I have decided to join them.