Posted by Ganteron on September 30, 2000 at 22:29:00:

Shokai, I've been going to your shrine for about a week and a half and you havent answered. Now, this could be because of bad timing(which an Imm told me it was before I deleted), it could be a sadistic joke, or it could be that you just wanted to test my patience.

I went to shrine multiple times a day, I even went to Asgaard a few times to prove my "Faith" and "Resilience". I thought I had a pretty good role and description. You just never answered me once, not even a sign. Was it something I did wrong? Was it a test of patience? Im sorry sir, but, I dont think I could ever wait almost two weeks for something I do on my spare time. For future refrance, can you post the hours you usually are on? I did a forum search and saw you said something about '5pm eastern to endless nights'. I tried those times, but nothing. So, help me out here. What am I doing wrong, what times are you on? Where do you buy your music?

Ill post my role and desc in case you didnt see it. Everyone is welcome to judge at well.

-Ganteron of the Ash'Gakan

desc A firm, tall, and serious man stands before you. Dark brown eyes and Dark brown hair.
desc + 6'3, about 165 lbs. He stands with reasurance and formality. He has a face as fair
desc + as Luthien Tinuviel. He wears a red-cloth around his ankle with runes around it. On
desc + hand are the words 'Ash'Gakan' carved in dried blood. His hair stands on end, it makes
desc + him look studious and smart. He face has a sense of honesty and loyalty. Eyes widely
desc + open. He has a clean shaven beard. He is of thin, but strong build. He seems very
desc + strong and balanced. Thin waist and strong legs. You can see his muscles over his gear
desc + quite well. No traces of battle-scars anywhere. He breathes heavier than most for some
desc + reason. He twitches weirdly, and his eyes randomly roll back. His left arm seems to be
desc + bit shorter than his right one. Even with his ailments, he stands proudly as a Holy
desc + Knight, A warrior of the Light, A priest of war. He looks at you, nods, and returns to
desc + his previous actions.
desc + Looking closer, you notice that....

role + He comes from the far of village of Ash'Gakan. A far off
role + land where no one ventures. He grew up with two brothers.
role + Being the middle child, he was always neglected. Always
role + being the last picked in games. Always thrown to the
role + side. Always picked on because of the way he breathed,
role + the way he twitched, the way his eyes werent normal.
role + He loved his family very much. Always worked along side
role + his brothers without reward. He never had a regret for
role + his actions. He loved his family and that was the bottom
role + His village was a very proud culture, every born male in
role + a family would be carved with the letters 'Ash'Gakan' on
role + there arm. It was a sign of pride, of faith, but most of
role + the Pheonix. Every one in that village was a follower of
role + the great lord Shokai. Everyone helped each other, everyone
role + despised the works of evil. Our homes, churches, markets,
role + all enshrouded with the images of lord Shokai. Everyone
role + prayed to the Great Lord. Ganteron stood out from the rest.
role + He always felt prayer was'nt enough. He needed to take action
role + All of the villagers laughed and mocked him because they thought
role + Such a weird young man could never become A Maran, A true follower
role + of Shokai. He had himself to trust in, a dependant young man.
role + Ganteron's village produced great warriors, warriors of faith,
role + but none with the will and strength to become more. On a dark
role + night, plague overcame the village. They called it 'The plague
role + of the Maran". Many died, many crippled to the extent of losing
role + vital organs and limbs. Everyone yelled our for the help of there
role + lord Shokai. He never showed, what came next, would change Ganteron
role + forever. The whole village used the great lord's name in vain.
role + 'Damn you, Shokai!', 'Where are you when we need you!', 'You have
role + betrayed us!'. The loss of faith dispersed his village and only
role + his family and a few others remained. He and his family would never
role + the great lord of the Maran. His younger brother and mother died
role + from the plague, yet his will was strong. He left the once beautiful
role + village to seek out his lord, to become what he was destined to become
role + to be...A true Maran.

Follow Ups:

• hrm.. Shokai(IMM) 20:54:22 10/1/2000 (0)
• just a few things that cought my eye observer 07:47:17 10/1/2000 (1)
  • This is all I wanted, constructive crit. Thank you, observer.n/t Ganteron 07:59:53 10/1/2000 (0)
• Re: Shokai, please read. Tharena 06:21:41 10/1/2000 (3)
  • Did you even read my post? I said 'I deleted'. Therefore, I cannot get empowered anymore. I just want to know for the future. n/t Ganteron 07:11:10 10/1/2000 (1)
    • All of my suggestions stand, as does the luck wish. If you deleted only after a week... Tharena 07:08:33 10/2/2000 (0)
  • Tharena pretty much hit that right on the head, couple extra things. Garenth 06:39:49 10/1/2000 (0)
• So let me ask, is the barrel in your mouth or against your temple? *bang* (n.txt) Zepachu 22:34:23 9/30/2000 (2)
  • What are you thinking? Daishan(VIP) 00:46:51 10/1/2000 (0)
  • Zepachus point misses Ganteron! Ganteron 22:40:30 9/30/2000 (0)

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