Posted by Ekirhal on November 4, 2000 at 13:55:11:
Hypothetically speaking, say I wanted to roll an Anti-paladin Arbiter. This is what I have so far... You see a female human. She looks to be about 5 feet tall. Her hair is just long enough to pull back in a short pony tail. It is pitch black and contrasts heavily with her lightly tanned skin. Her eyes are brown and she has thin red lips. Armor covers most of her body but her arms and legs look to be strong and toned. She appears to be quite young but lacks a sense of innocence. She dons a few cuts and bruises and upon closer inspection you see that… I tried to make it vague enough that it would apply no matter when you looked at me. (ie sleeping, standing, butt-naked having sex with Proud Blade or Zepachu or dryads, etc *wink*)I'm shooting for all inclusive here. I always hated walking up on someone who was asleep and I look at them and their description says "Standing before you is such and such..." Any suggestions on wording or adjectives or sentence structure or whatever are appreciated. And please be nice. I'm not an english major. If you're just going to flame me don't bother.