So, JPG's can be uploaded to third party hosting and linked to here. I'd use Tinypic.com or make a free little site on webs.com and link things directly from there. PDFs can be shared easily via Rapidshare, Mediafire, etc. Just basic file hosting sites.

Time for random stuff!:



"Only Padwei, Yean and Neltouda would offer any of their descendents any kind of sanctuary."
^^^^ Descendants. Descendents would be talking about going down, descendants are people who come from specific ancestors.


"We shall begin, at a happy reunion of cousins. " --> I don't like this transition. I'm not saying it's terrible or anything like that, nor do I have a perfect one to give you - But I don't think that's a very catching way to move into the story. So, if anything, I'd just suggest toying around with that more until you find a transition that's a bit more pulling.



"The intense blue eyes that both their grandparents had carried to their final days, stuck out." --> I just don't like this phrasing. That's just like, my opinion, man. 'Intense blue eyes, remnants of...' 'They shared the same intense blue eyes that...'. Not saying it's horrible, once again, that phrase compared to others simply pokes out at me as not fitting the same tone.


"as if they had were veterans of many campaigns" Has anybody ever been so far as had were veterans of many campaigns? 'Had were veterans'. 'As if they were veterans of many campaigns'. 'A confidence found commonly among war veterans/campaigners/lolwutever.' Obvious little mistype there, so you do whutchu want with it.



It's cute though, well done, I like it.

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