First of all, don't put actions in your description. As someone else stated below, what if you are sleeping? Second of all, your entire description, minus the actions, is that you have oak-colored hair braided down your back and your hands are calloused. And you don't see a problem with this?
When writing a description, ask yourself these questions. What color are your eyes? Are they oval, round, squinty? Long eyelashes or short? Your face, is it round and pudgy or angular and sharp? Do you have facial hair? If an arial, what color are your feathers and what parts of your body is covered with them? What is your basic physical build? Are you short and stocky or tall and lanky? Rounded ears or pointy ones? Prominent proboscis or mushed nose? What tone is your skin? Light or Dark? Any birth marks, moles, freckles, or scars? Clothing? I generally stay away from specific armors, but under your armor you would probably have shirt and trousers, what color? What material? You could also use generic armor descriptions, if you plan on wearing heavy armor you can put that in your description, just don't put darkened platemail, etc. What do your shoes/boots look like? Do you wear gloves or gauntlets? Earrings? Glasses? Long flowing robes with arcane symbols stitched in them? Do you carry a money pouch?
If you include the answers to even half of those questions, you will have a full description that will keep you out of the description room and you won't have to worry about being 'harrassed' by the 'bully' imms.