While I agree with much of this, I slightly disagree...

Sam
April 09, 2015 10:58AM
Now, maybe it's because I interacted with Siegmar a few times, but the role perfectly explained his IC actions to me.

Granted, it took a while.

And FWIW, I feel like he "won" because of the litany of CF-centric references in his role. IE, it was a role that liberally used real PC mobs and aspects of Hamsah. Whenever I take time to write a role that I want to win a role contest with (and FWIW, I haven't wrote a role since 2012...well, that's not entirely true...I wrote a decent role for a lowbie that I deleted after 15 hours), I always ALWAYS make sure I litter it with CF references (real PC names, real cities, items, etc).
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Siegmar's Role

Quixotic 501 April 08, 2015 06:12PM

Great stuff. Keep up the good work, Q! (n/t)

Drokk 301 April 10, 2015 02:00AM

This was a very enjoyable read. Although, I must say that I feel like you won for just that. Writing a nice short story.

TJHuron 260 April 09, 2015 10:18AM

Rationale for an epic backstory

Quixotic 272 April 09, 2015 01:56PM

My observation

daurwyn(VIP) 258 April 09, 2015 09:33PM

Limit the number of things that can be improved.

Quixotic 268 April 10, 2015 04:34PM

So do i

daurwyn(VIP) 236 April 10, 2015 11:13PM

Having some depth to a character is a wonderful thing, I agree

TJHuron 239 April 09, 2015 03:32PM

Again, it may not have told you who never saw the character nothing, but as someone who interacted with Siegmar, the role really fleshed out his RP. NT

Sam 210 April 09, 2015 03:48PM

I hear you. I guess you and I have different ideas of what a role is.

TJHuron 240 April 09, 2015 04:23PM

While I agree with much of this, I slightly disagree...

Sam 252 April 09, 2015 10:58AM

These mobs are some adventurous motherfuckers. (n/t)

Doof 200 April 09, 2015 01:54PM

This is why I don't bother with roles much. At best, I put in a bulletted list. I couldn't spew crap like this back in school when I had to, I certainly am not going to bother now. (n/t)

Falstaff 195 April 09, 2015 09:50AM

I like writing, and I didn't want Siegmar to be a mob with good AI progs.

Quixotic 227 April 09, 2015 01:59PM

Please don't misunderstand, I'm glad you enjoy it! It's just not my bag. (n/t)

Falstaff 250 April 17, 2015 03:39AM

Spending that much effort to make such an awesome role, no wonder you have deleted after flaming out (n/t)

Kstatida 215 April 09, 2015 04:53AM

Very, very nicely done. That being said, tldr (n/t)

Doof 242 April 09, 2015 01:21AM

Haha, seconded. (n/t)

Murphy 180 April 09, 2015 03:43AM



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